i still remember when you looked at me in the special way
i can remind my self when you tried to tell me 'i love you'
i understand finally you made up your mind by not telling me the truth
i think you thought it would be a strange love if you told me
coz if you want to love somebody it would be easy
but when you really want to it would be pain, suffering and crying
I find this poem beautiful because it communicates your true feelings in an honest way Your poems are lovely - true emotions are very valuable things. Keep writing!
I on the other hand gave you a *10* because Poetic Expression is its own definition. When we endeavor to live by what others conceive or perceive that we should be, we cease to be ourselves and our ability to express ourselves in the manner which is like our skin becomes a straight jacket that someone else has restrained us with. Beautiful piece, write from your heart and all else will make sense of its own accord. Be Well, Nate
Very well done. I would have given it a 10, but I abhor the use of 'coz' instead of 'cause' or 'because', but that is just personal opinion =)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Moments so meaningful you've written into poem.. Nice write..