I Was There Poem by Onyx Davis

I Was There

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Today I looked up and saw a cloud
Not just a cloud, a dark cloud
I looked all around me
only to find
an end
An end to what had just begun

The air was just not as sweet
not clean enough to breath
Why don't I just go back, I thought
Because I would never come back

This place, so desolte and bare
no ones here, no one's breathing
silence, is all I hear
Where are you?

Can you guess where I am?
The present, a not so pleasent time
Why so desolte and bear?
No one knows, but I was there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brendon Secrist 20 November 2008

We're both living in the present and its not so pleasant but we can bare with it together. Love, - HB

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