I Wish! Poem by Pranayee Rachamalla

I Wish!

Rating: 5.0


i wish my heart is a flower,
so that the fragrance of my feelings can reach you,
I wish my mind is a butterfly
so that my thoughts can fly and reach you,
I wish my life is a rose,
so that i can compare the petals with our memories.
I wish my feelings become a building,
so that my trust on you can be built till the top most floor.
I wish our relation is a stone,
so that i can sculpt it skillfully and carve it beautifully.
I wish my heart is a creative cloud,
so that the colourful rain drops of my love
reach you and your response can create a rainbow.
now the hidden mystery of your heart will be discovered
because I have got seven colours to view,
to illuminate the mystery
and to unblock the reality!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dedicated to my friend ' Govind ' who helped me completed this poem! he is a poet too, ofcourse one of my favorite poets!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 23 May 2016

I will give a full 10 to you for your rainbow poem.....my wavelength matches with the ideology.....nature.....the undisputed generator of emotions can be a building block for generating appealing poems...

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thank you sir! for your nice comment and for reading too!

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Topnotch wishes, be on cloud nine always, heartfelt wish dear, keep rocking

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thanks a lot maam for your valuable comment and nice words

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