David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

I Wonder - Poem by David Darbyshire

As I sit
and observe
the silver arrow heads
cutting through
the light blue sky,
I wonder were
they are all going
and why?


Comments about I Wonder by David Darbyshire

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (5/6/2006 9:12:00 AM)

    The dream to take flight as you see the silver arrows cutting through the sky. Love it Dave!

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  • Rookie Goldy Locks (5/6/2006 8:01:00 AM)

    i'd change it to:

    i wonder where they are
    all going
    and why?

    p'haps....?

    best care, Sus. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 6, 2006



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