Do I see flicker of a shine
being left without a choice
when I sing to her the first line
and she has to lend her voice.
Girl I needed to see your face
but you hid it for too long
denied me that one happiness
till I broke into a song.
From you I needed just one line
see once your parted lip
to make you girl all of mine
sink into your eyes deep.
Sing a line girl sing me one
promise I wouldn't ask more
I would treasure it when you're gone
hold one line in heart's core.
wow wat a romantic poem....loved it.........loved the lines see once your parted lip to make you girl all of mine- sink into your eyes deep I think she had some obligations at her end due to which she was hiding her face for too long and hence avoided the parting of lips: -)
Denied me that one happiness, till I broke into a song. It takes a lot to write that Chattopadhyay, loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nicely composed and it has all the sweetness of a song...........profound