zandile zoya

Iam A Women - Poem by zandile zoya

who i am to be doubting
waking up every morning
not feeling like talking or walking
not in the mood of smiling
while people are busy loughing

who am i to be treated like a fool
as if am a useless tool to this world
why make me cry, when you can make smile
why watch my tears, when you can wash away fears
why cause pain, when you can bring me joy

who i am...?
i am a women
i am the light of this world
the one reason that is world can not do without
iam the hope...
the future
i mean am the mother of this nation

i need active minds to drive this world around
i am a women
i feel the pain but i naver cry
because i know this world with out me will never go round

am fregile
i need love
most of all, i need to be treated like a queen
because i derseve better....

Comments about Iam A Women by zandile zoya

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (8/14/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    a good write for the women of this world. everyone has their needs. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 6,975 Points Sekharan Pookkat (8/8/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    great thinking- I like it very much and appreciate you for sharing your poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Ckim Mbasa (7/24/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    Great write but please arrange your stanzas in order to give it a flow, spice them with ironies and improve the grammar. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 307 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/11/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    Great tribute to all women in the world, but check the grammar dear.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,945 Points Hazel Durham (7/11/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    A powerful and compelling write about all the great attributes women have in abundance! ! (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

[Hata Bildir]