If Poem by Amanda Lukas

If

Rating: 5.0


If only it hadn't happened
and these events didn't
constantly replay in my mind.
And the stars still
shined brightly
in a dark midnight sky.
If tears hadn't fallen
and wishes had come true
and winter had never come
but morning glories bloomed.
If I could have changed
a decission or two,
maybe life would be sweeter
than life without you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amberlee Carter 16 February 2006

ok, my first thought was honestly, this is sort of childish. but then looking back on it, love is completely childish in some regard and will make grown adults act like children. there's a sweetness to this poem as well, that makes it both adorable and sad. I want to give you a hug now...In Short, I came away totally digging this piece of yours...pen on sister poetess... Always, Amberlee

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Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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