If I Die Poem by Josh Jett

If I Die

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If i die, would u cry? I held ur hand with mine. I looked in ur beautiful eyes. I took my breathing slowly. I closed my eyes. tears filled ur eyes. My hand slowly aparted with urs. Ur tears covered my cold heart. I felt all the love u had 4 me. I opened my eyes, i said 2 u 'i love u'. My eyes closed with ur tears on my heart. I felt ur love in my last beat of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Effie Yalena Steyn 14 January 2008

Beautiful sentiment and great phrasing, I love the first sentence. Great first poem, I am looking forward to reading more. Effie xx

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