If I Woke Up, Black... [skin Color; Response To Diana Van Den Berg; Short; Humour; Fantasy] Poem by Bri Edwards

If I Woke Up, Black... [skin Color; Response To Diana Van Den Berg; Short; Humour; Fantasy]

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If i woke up black, to....
sleep I might go back.
Not because I'm 'white',
but I'd NOT believe my sight.

I'd think I was just dreaming,
and not about coffee steaming,
but of a major change in my life,
which might cause a bit o' strife.

For instance, what to tell my wife?
'Dear, I stayed in the sun too long.'
(Should I sing it in a tribal song?)
(accompanied by a drum and fife?)

Or would she consider this fine answer:
'a delayed gene, from an ancestor'?
Could I get my wish to be on the NEWS,
giving my now-black-AND-white views?

I think there would be money to be had.
Whites dying skin black might become a fad.
But would my silvery hair go well with black?
Should I just crawl back into my warm 'sack'?

(March 15, 2015)

Sunday, March 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: race
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My poem is my response to Diana van den Berg's tiny, but marvelous poem: If I Woke Up Black. thanks, Diana (not the princess, but the 'queen' of S. Africa, a 'white woman'....i think) .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 17 April 2024

Skin colour is what we see outside.Can any one fathom the emotions going under a particular skin colour?

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Bharati Nayak 17 April 2024

A nice poem Bri! I have not read Diana's poem, Your poem gives an insight into the shock and wonder one would experience if his skin colour changes that way.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Many poems go years, full of tears, praying for anyone to READ. If anyone besides me HAS DONE MORE than read, their comments must be invisible indeed! ! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2020

five years and no comment besides mine! ! ! ? ? ha ha to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2015

OOPS! bleaching skin should read dying skin black. i must have been thinking of a sequel: If I Woke Up White. bri :)

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