If Life Were....... Poem by Sandra Feldman

If Life Were.......

Rating: 5.0


If life were only poetry,
We'd dine and live on Fantasy,
We'd love and be in Harmony,
With Peace, being our Symphony.

Sunday, November 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written after reading the wonderful poem 'I Return to the World of Poetry' by Shalom Freedman.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 04 November 2014

As inspirational as the poem that inspired you, its brief but addresses your subject in a tight and fluid manner. This really hits home, I'm not a real poet, but I take comfort in its art as a means of meditation, although I know I overdose on the fantasy as an escape from reality, but then who doesn't? . Lovely stuff, words of comfort just like chocolate.

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Michael Mcparland 03 November 2014

A truly bright and hopeful look at what could be. Nothing to add or say. Excellent piece.

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Leah Ayliffe 03 November 2014

Simple and rings a beautiful truth.

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