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Msuthukazi ayanda Noganta


If You Could See My Heart


You would not believe the pace of its beat neither would u wish to let it ease the intensity of its heat ol u would probably do is admit that between you n I there is chemical defeat! A field of intimacy that identifies substances from which this matter is composed. Hence you would try and squiz in  the phrase chemistry, claiming that my heart investigates properties n ways in which you and I interact combine and probably change

If you could see my heart

you would believe the look on my face cause my expression takes the picture inside n brings it out! U would write songs n poems and compose beats but none would match cause the only counterpart would be that beat in yors fully so the picture you can keep cause its your's truely!

If you could see my heart

You wouldnt have to ask how I felt about you cause it would be visible to your undenying site,  you wouldnt have to wonder if it beats for you cause it would be calling you in every plight then you would never say'she never showed me her heart'

If you could see my heart

you'd see exactly how it looks wen it loves, how it smiles when it's happy, how it apreciates that its loved, how it hopes that it lasts, how it leaps at ur sight, how it responds to your heart, then maybe
Jus maybe, you'd keep that smile for as long as we are...

Submitted: Thursday, February 21, 2013
Edited: Friday, February 22, 2013
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Dedicated to all the women who wish their partners would see their hearts :)

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