If You 'D Let Your Walls Come Down Poem by Susan Lacovara

If You 'D Let Your Walls Come Down

Rating: 5.0


If you'd let your walls come down, then I could walk right in
To safely store your secrets, confess your every sin...

If you'd open up the latch, secures your steely gate
I'd stroll the lamplight corridors, where your fears congregate...

If you'd throw your window sash, let in the blistering light
I could shield what once burned you, perhaps to new delight...

If you 'd break your fences free, no boundaries to divide
I could lead you to meadows, sweet...where we could then reside

If you'd dare to risk it all, the stakes, to ante up
I could bring an avalanche, by which to fill your cup

If you'd look beyond the obvious, to see what's plain in view
I could paint a lovely portrait, of life, spent loving you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(10/12/13) it could be smooth sailing...if someone helps to row...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 27 February 2014

Nice words with sweet thoughts. Thanks

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Brings to mind a picnic in a secluded meadow... sweet summer breezes... sitting beside a pond while dragonflies nip at water's surface and the cattails sway in the softness of summer... a very wistful feeling all in all...enjoyed this much.

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 October 2013

A lovely portrait, of life

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