Im Alone Poem by Sruthi Varma

Im Alone



Im alone..
Filled with loneliness.
Loneliness in my place.
Loneliness in my mind.

Im alone..
Even left alone by my shadow in the darkness.
Getting daggered by loneliness all the time.
Standing amid of the blue, with tear filled eyes.

Im alone..
Moving alone all the way.
Tired of feeling lonely.
Started being friendly with loneliness,
Coz everything and everyone left me
But not my loneliness..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 05 August 2012

A good poem. I like the repitition of the word lonelinessand the dagger part. Good poem. I'd be glad to see your comments about my poems too. Thanks

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Joshua Crumpton 05 August 2012

Great poem! I can relate to it alot.

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Harindhar Reddy 05 August 2012

Why are intruding in to my domain? ha ha i just played joke as i written 35 poems on loneliness but your poem is equally impressive............

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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Dr. P.k. Verma 19 August 2012

very good concept and presentation. you are not alone Sruthi. This world is very beautiful try to find out some colours from it

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

You're not alone anymore Sruthi, for now, you are surrounded by the Love of words, and thier authors... a bond that ties with freedom of speech and the power of the written word. A kinship of free thinkers and romantics, hope hunters and dreamers... so you see- you're not alone, not by a longshot! Great write Sruthi! I enjoy your style! Kelly.

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