I'm Not Your Mother's Friend Poem by Renee Marie

I'm Not Your Mother's Friend

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"It's an abomination and you
haven't even known her long enough to say
I love you"!

I won't tell her about the way I fall in love
over and over a cup of tea
or our peanut butter
and jelly picnics.

I won't tell her about the bottles
of Turning Leaf Chardonnay, our
wine glasses wobbling silly
at the grassy edge
of scenic overlooks
near West Point where we giggled
at my first salute as our tipsey eyes
chased dragonflies

I won't tell her of our giving-in and curling-up
and feeling twenty-four
instead of forty-two.

I won't tell her about sparklers on the deck
With Autumn moon nectar trickling
Down our chilly throats or how she
likes cool lips
these cool lips
just after feeling breathless at the touch
of feathers ‘cross her mocha belly.

No, I won't tell her how much I desire
her Mother
in countless simple ways, 'cause I'd
say it all wrong,
tripping all over my love-sick self
in the presence of her calculated criticism
and perhaps reduce my expanse of joy
to an endless defensive discourse which a
fearful Daughter needs so much
to win.

Saturday, April 6, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: homophobia
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this about a week after getting my Direct Commission in the CTARNG.I was enamoured with this beautiful womyn and we did NOT have the capacity to work through our communication challenges.We were two impulsive, creative junkies.One cold morning, some words ripped through me in a way that I could not return to a sweet, loving place again.Since then, I have learned a lot about myself and my responsibility to self-regulate even when I feel hurt.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Titto Mutunguti 17 October 2015

Some one shld read this poem...I read it again n cant help but comment..the topic is intresting

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Titto Mutunguti 06 April 2013

i wont tell you i liked ur poem..Thumbs up

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Renee Marie

Renee Marie

Danbury, CT USA
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