Immovable Man Poem by Kevin Familia

Immovable Man

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Immovable man
You are the obstacle of action
You are the old life and a obstruction
To which you follow, the ways of sin
In me you crave my submission
To God, I want to follow
Yet you always insist, 'follow the shadow'

How you are immovable!
How I need to move!
Inside, you make me miserable!
Each day, like a screech out of reach!
Me and you are one
Even God pity's my immovable life!
You keep me every day away from a new life!

I ask God yet, he needs my sacrifice!
The sacrifice of him who is immovable!
Yet he is a wall in my heart
An old man, must be no more!
The new man must be!
Yet stubborn this one, in me

How then will one move?
With a man who is immovable!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 05 November 2023

True. It is difficult to move with such heaviness inside. Your poem made my thoughts fly high

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 May 2023

this poem is brilliant as a shooting star Bravo! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 10 May 2023

Just wonderful......thanks for sharing....

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Terence Craddock 03 May 2023

This line 'Yet you always insist, 'follow the shadow''; I found very interesting, decades ago I wrote a long poem about following shadow; memories stirred.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 May 2023

Meditate...and you will find your answer! Great poem, Kevin!

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