Improve Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Improve

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Aldo Kraas)

Life gets a pleasant nudge
In the right direction

Health matters look to improve
Recovers life priority

Also creates more time for fun
More opportunity to happy holiday

(inspired by Kitaro’s Koi)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

this is nice..to improve is a part of civilization..naizz

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Shimon Weinroth 15 November 2008

profound and true 10 minimalistic poetry has a habit to make concise and precise dilute the poetic flow? and does not always express the metaphoric side?

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 November 2008

If wealth is lost something is lost, but if health is lost everything is lost.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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