Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Rookie (August 28,1976 / Southern Oklahoma... )

In My Eyes - Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

In My Eyes


In my eyes
You would see traces of wickedness
Outlines of solitariness
Amber flames of passion unleashed

In my eyes
You would see a salty sea
The waves would be dreadful
The black water inviting

In my eyes
You would see a haunting
Sinfully dark and foul
Many look away in fear

In my eyes
You would see a raging fire
Ablaze with stifled passion
Awaiting your tempting touch

In my eyes
If you look in them deeply
And not through them
You would see a promise of forever.



Copyright © 08-23-2007 Kristin Roth-Davis


Comments about In My Eyes by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

  • Gold Star - 37,505 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/24/2007 8:56:00 PM)

    Inveterating read, Miss Kris! Vivid imagework, and a myriad display of passion and emotional accord & discord...Excellent delivery...smooth, crisp crafting...Another Grand Slam, my dear!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 31, 2011


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