In My Mind Poem by louis rams

In My Mind

Rating: 5.0


'in my mind' i have climbed the highest mountain
i have swam the deepest sea.
i have done everything for you to get close to me.

in my mind
there is peace throughout the world
joy in the hearts of every boy and girl.
famine no longer exists
people living in total bliss.

people at work and at play
enjoying the beauties of the day.
people greeting each other in a friendly manner
raising a schools loving banner.

people stopping to help one another
and calling each other sister and brother.
weapons of destruction are in the past
peace and love 'is what lasts.'

a bartering system has started again
money is no longer a friend.
all the good things in our minds
will last throughout all of time.

all our feelings, all our desires
will explode in a frenzied fire.
they will spread throughout all lands
to make people understand
that love and peace is our goal
and a dream that we should hold.

THIS IS WHAT I SEE

'IN MY MIND'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

like a branch you feed from the tree.

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 August 2009

'In My Mind' explains how you see this world. I hope and wish at least on oneday it will be true.

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Heather S 30 July 2009

this thought should be in every ones mind, but its not sadly.this is yet another poem that I think the world should read.I love this poem, thanks again Mr.Louis for the inspiration.10/10 Heather

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Christine Kerr 30 July 2009

I know that this is where life is soppose to be, but the greed and hatred has taken over so much of everthing. I think you've been to heaven and back. 10 again

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