louis rams (09/13/1943 / new york city)

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' I Am ' SKY #4 series

' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.

louis rams
Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009
Edited: Sunday, March 29, 2009

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  • Roneece Pieters (9/11/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    it was so beautifully true.

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  • Rachel Ann love, love, love and life Butler (11/19/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    'The rainbows is my heart at rest'

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Mehta hasmukh amathalal (7/9/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    i am ' sky
    my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10


    read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come

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  • Christine Kerr (4/2/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded.

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  • Sandra Fowler (3/30/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (3/30/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    a good imaginative write.......10

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  • Leslie Alexis (Heaven is My Home) (3/29/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    now this is your most unique piece. i really like it

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/29/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    lovely poem...each comparison was very apt...light blue..dark blue...stars...lightning...rain

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  • Christine Kerr (3/29/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    This one is a beautiful sign of what you could call the lords personality. Another good one

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