In My Mind Poem by Freya Grace

In My Mind

Rating: 3.5


In my mind
we have time
to sleep our troubles away
and never have to bother
with the worries of our past
that bite and scratch our ankles
as we run away so fast
leave them in the dust

Oh, love, I want you back
so come and rest with me
ignore their grating words
that push and prod for answers
to questions left unheard

Bring the moon with you
I’ll bring the stars
and our love will make the comets
and we’ll go so far

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 June 2013

except for my wanting to change the line: leave them in the dust to leaving them in the dust, i would not change a thing in your poem. i think it is grand. i love the lines: ignore their grating words that push and prod for answers to questions left unheard thanks for sharing. i hope this will not be your last submission to poemhunter.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 June 2013

bring the moon with you, good love, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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