In Pensive Mood Poem by Rezeile Eigo

In Pensive Mood

Rating: 5.0


As I walk down the empty alley
The dreamer dreams
The poet's dreams
Of crisp parchment and scratchy quills.

Prisoned I was in a valley
Of golden beams
And sided dims -
The hidden realms of folly?

And as the darkness spills,
The rosy wings
Of thought swims.
I was lost in there wholly...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 05 October 2008

thoughts lberated by obscurity from the narrow 'dims' of the valley of golden folly...artistic piece...good rhythm and rhyming through out...10

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Albert Arsenio Sison 16 June 2008

WOW! ! ! i have nothing to say to this peace... it is the best dedication to the frustrations of an inspired writer... wow i wished i had thought to write this theme... but i can never write this as elegant as you...

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Rezeile Eigo

Rezeile Eigo

manila, philippines
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