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Louis Rams
(11/4/2009 9:13:00 PM) |
the child that roams inside is the one we try to hide.
he is there to show the way,
so that we will not stray.
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Sandra Martyres
(10/31/2009 10:08:00 PM) |
A very poignant piece Jon....your raise so many meaningful questions about life...10
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Alandra Moreira
(10/31/2009 5:44:00 AM) |
I love this poem, theres much of an untouched feeling in it... a universal understanding that kind of lives in our outreaching conscience. Very meaningful and inspiring.
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Yelena M.
(10/30/2009 9:14:00 AM) |
What a touching and elevated verse, Jon..Your poems never disappoint and bring new colours and hues into our life..Thanks for sharing. Yelena M.
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Nivedita Bagchi
(10/28/2009 9:43:00 AM) |
...child that roams inside...'
Indeed a great poem. But to be child or to release we've to shed off our [-] ves thro' pure conscience. And it is a rigorous sustained psychic exercise.
I find good thoughts always from your poems JON
Ten+++
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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Tai Chi Italy
(10/27/2009 5:26:00 AM) |
I believe we will. A highly touching poem In The Silence! thank you for making me cry...
Smiling at you
Tai, too sentimental for this cruel world
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Lady Grace
(10/27/2009 4:27:00 AM) |
in the silence
where no one talks
and no one hears
in the silence......
nuisance...justice prevails, justice denied
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Fay Slimm
(10/27/2009 1:49:00 AM) |
Poignant and movingly beautiful Jon - - - the questions posed are meaningful to us all..... thank you - - 10 Fay
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