In Vain Poem by jalal sadati

In Vain



There is no life but you baby
You see the emptiness too maybe
My body is your eyes' container
Every look fills me, makes me be

Versing to you makes me crazy
When i compare you to a daisy
But again verses are not you
You are you and words are empty

I poetry your hair, your every single smile
Talk about your lips walk with you a mile
I kiss every part of you in full intention
But nothing express im filled with you, no style

You just should be in me for a while
You make me move, darling, you make Nile
But then again i try in vain, it's a pain
You who know most of me...

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,expression,intention,life,vanity,verse,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

I poetry your hair, your every single smile Talk about your lips walk with you a mile I kiss every part of you in full intention But nothing express im filled with you, no style _________________________________ Interesting the way you used the word 'poetry' as a verb quite contrary to the usual koshers of poetry itself... Thank you for sharing Jalal.. It was an interesting read :)

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Kelly Kurt 04 November 2015

An expressive poem, Jalai. Thanks for sharing

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 November 2015

a poignant, emotional poem, Jalal, thanks for sharing and WELCOME at PH! Cheers

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