Innocent Dead Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Innocent Dead

Rating: 5.0


HEART TO HEART
clasped and cuddled
the mother and baby
lay there in dust
no music heard
their heart never bate

the picture in newsprint
amidst a shamble
an attack from air
oh god death you give i thought
is war..your new weapon
loads and loads of innocent dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

samanyan, Unfortunately innocent mothers and children again perishes... very sad poem...10... Tsira

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2009

your wording praisworthy! the fact is, events occur here are related with many actions so far..... 10+

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Catrina Heart 09 November 2009

war just trims down the life of all innocent beings esp. mothers and children........Great piece! ! !

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rago rago 10 November 2009

very fine write....................

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Nikunj Sharma 10 November 2009

Ah! what a touching piece, bringing out the realities of modern world. attcks, wars, guns, bombs......shredding and ripping apart the nations, continents, limbs and human beings...nice poem

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 November 2014

Congratulations Samanyan Lakshminarayanan....Loads and loads of innocent dead are occurring in the war as well as poor zones of the world...very touching...

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Liliana ~el 12 November 2013

Deep

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Lyn Paul 12 November 2013

Who would think that we would still be seeing greed and hatred in this century. It is insane and such a disgrace that these innocent lives mean so little to those killing. Thank you, you have expressed so well

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2013

Heart rendering. Natural disasters are devastating. This is well captured in this poem. Good job

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And we thought death was only a serpent in the grass Well, it can rain from above, bombs from the sky so blue Men have invented things that fly not for peace alas But in wars to deliver fire and destruction to the very edge of doom All ye reading this, I welcome you to my page too....

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