SALINI NAIR

Bronze Star - 6,475 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Inside a family


That time was twilight
There oomph was in hue
The sunshine was in rush
Only Shade was there in that circle
Swift the rigidity of life then
In the mind gust pensiveness
There the body gazes in marvel
The spouse was in loneliness
So that the latter faint itself
Mind looks body in whisper
Tiredness lush to their side
Both drown in seclusion
There the split was in range
It keeps mum for a while
But the body bends to its shoulder
There they hug in whisper
Later they arise to a lovely dawn
There they mend a lovely start
In that rush lighten the world
Being fertile and powerful
Ease of love and togetherness
Soul and body the lovely couple! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Thursday, August 21, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (8/23/2014 4:02:00 AM)

    its the time of sleep...when mind is about to sleep, body need to be a part of it and vice versa...like couples there exists a policy of give and take......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,706 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/22/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    The poetess has portrayed the binary of life 0 and 1...body and soul 'Tis the unique combination by the creator,
    Thank you Salini keep it up Glory to be Allah (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,706 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/22/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    The poetess has portrayed the binary of life 0 and 1...body and soul 'Tis the unique combination by the creator,
    Thank you Salini keep it up Glory to be Allah (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2014 1:55:00 PM)

    Lovely love poem....Beautiful way you have portrayed body and soul as a beautiful couples. Beautiful flow of words. I loved reading it twice. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,255 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/21/2014 1:04:00 PM)

    Feelings of love expressed so elegantly.........very well penned (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,309 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (8/21/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Beautiful word power and poem on expression of love felt it so nice. (Report) Reply

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