insomnia steals sheep
capturing them for ransom
all banks closed for night
Insomnia affects many people. It is at its worse when our sheep are kidnapped in the middle of the night and we do not have anything to count to help us sleep.
If i had read this writing lightly or casually, i would smile and ask myself what is it all about. But there is insomnia, then sheep instead of sleep, and closed bank. They make a fablous combination, very creative Mohabeer Beeharry
Thank you for your kind review. Insomnia seems to bother more people than we know. Our brains are like computers sometimes it is difficult to shut them off. All the best, Sonia.
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Hi That is an exquisite expression- All banks closed for the night. As a banker and an insomniac, I could relate to your poem easily. Thank you Sonia.
It is fun to write about things which are the least inspirational. Thank you for adding additional color to my wordsmith canvas. Have a great day, Sonia.