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Inspiration

Looking into the future with a gladdened heart
Pulling things together, not easy but smart
Why dwell on the sorrows of my heart
If I've decided, never from my hopes shall I depart?

Pushing me each day to stay on the right path
Can never go astray now why would I do that?
Is this the beginning of an emotional dead end?
I do believe it's a body and mind blend

Call it crazy call it insane
This is the only way to let go of failures pain
Out of joy my heart extremely pounds
That's what I like to call inspirations sound

Submitted: Friday, August 03, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sometimes we dwell on how hard we have fallen or on the mistakes which we've made, forgetting that life still goes on and there is much more to live for. So why not look forward to a better tomorrow!

Comments about this poem (Inspiration by Maropene Makgoba )

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/4/2012 7:24:00 AM)

    a very subtle message/keep writing

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  • Michael Round (8/3/2012 4:07:00 PM)

    Quite a nice one... but I have a problem with punctuation... failures pain - failure's pain
    inspirations sound - inspiration's sound

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