Intermission Poem by anais vionet

Intermission

Rating: 5.0


I was dazzled - in
a summer spell - did we both
name it as special?

Was it the summer
freedom - the sparkling lake
that summoned magic?

The constant sun sent
a subliminal message
with its rise and fall.

It won't last, it said,
there's an expiration
date approaching fast.

The short-lived summer
proved a brief, insubstantial
memory making.

Friday, October 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,lake,romance,summer,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Summer spells are sweet but fleeting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 02 October 2020

Yes summer is sweet but fleeting, In India summer is little lengthy March to June. 10** Was it the summer freedom - the sparkling lake that summoned magic?

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 October 2020

Nice one. Instead of rain rain go away Cath y wants to go out and play Summer summer come my way Anais wants you A little longer stay If you sing every year for years the summer might stop being so fleetingly short. Try it!

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