I ask for your hand glowingly calm,
Gracefully placed into my waiting palm,
My finger gently traces a heart on top,
Love explodes spectacular never to stop,
With a kiss lightly upon the center,
Looking in your sparkling eyes to whisper,
This is where my wanting soul will enter.
Pretty poem very well written. It is sweet written with innocence. Great Job!
aww, i love it, the words you use make everything POP! xx millie xx
i love this poem! ! especially: lookin into your sparkling eyes to whisper this is where my wanting soul will enter. i go by the name bright eyes at home and church! ! what a coincidence! ! ! ; D anyways great poem, keep it up
Gracefully placed into my waiting palm, My finger gently traces a heart on top, Rachel Ann Butler
Looking in your sparkling eyes to whisper, This is where my wanting soul will enter. love those lines... Dixie is right... this is dreamy and meaningful great job. Purkey
i love this poem so much it sounds so dreamy and meaningful
This poem is SO dreamy. Omg it's sooo nice and romantic and...wow so deep Beautiful Job -Tess
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow - such gentle persuasion. Perfect poetry 10/10