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5.9
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We transzited here apart & alone
Until our adventures in luck & laughtor
Now we'r together in heart & stone
A new exciteing plain to explor
my vauel to you this day
To be true blue, to you
In love, life, and play
My lucky charm defender, pink leprecon slayer
Supercalifragilisticexpialdocious, **PAY**
Pirate Love Magic Man
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Friday, July 25, 2008 |
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Tuesday, July 29, 2008 |
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Comments about this poem (*Slayer*#*
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Farangiz Secret :) (2/3/2009 9:39:00 AM)
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ur funny and this is totally awesome...like the second line..
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Catrina Heart (1/19/2009 10:00:00 AM)
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humor poetry..nice one though needs few editings my friend...Loved your poem.
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Bobbie Mcnay (10/30/2008 11:44:00 AM)
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that poemis good i really like it
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Aijaz Asif (9/21/2008 7:51:00 AM)
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in a single long word
you are everything
and im nothing
im blind everything's fake
i can only see you
cause you are real.....nice write, thhanks
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Brittany graviet (9/10/2008 12:43:00 AM)
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its really good, but the last line looses me, i don't get it, but maybe i'm not supposed to?
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Tyease Collins (8/7/2008 9:27:00 AM)
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This is nice...she really likes it lol
I do too =]
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~*~(\ /) ~*~Payyton: DrowningSorrow~*~(\ /) ~*~ (7/26/2008 8:30:00 PM)
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I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ....Your the best side kick i've EVER had! ! ...This was soooo sweet! ! ! thank you sooooooo much! ! ! !
<3Payyton! ! ! !
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