It Showed Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE
It Showed
(From the office)
this 26th August, on the coming back road
In the bus I was in me; subconsciously I
Forgot the activeness of colorful outside
Outside was caged by the local cacophony of
Crowded vehicles and police checking out;
The license of the bus maybe was out of date
Date of my transcendental mind discovered
Another path; incalculable sparrows were
There on the mango tree beyond of the mosque
Mosque drew my attention to the silent graves
And rhythmic twittering of the birds; oh, where
I was I know not, but the afternoon holiness showed
Showed that- life is easy in an unharmed place
In silence, rhythmic life increases the natural grace
28.08.2020 Chattogram
Struggle with self nicely put it in this poem, great imagery and fine flow.10+ Mosque drew my attention to the silent graves And rhythmic twittering of the birds; oh, where I was I know not, but the afternoon holiness showed\\\\
A well scribed fantastic poem. Simply marvelous.....10++++
'life is easy in an unharmed place In silence' - Yes, it's true!
the life is easy in unharmed place In silence, rhythmic life increases the natural grace with HIS GRACE EM BE
Date of my transcendental mind discovered Another path; incalculable sparrows were There on the mango tree beyond of the mosque Mosque drew my attention to the silent graves And rhythmic twittering of the birds; oh, where I was I know not; but the afternoon holiness showed Showed that- the life is easy in unharmed place In silence, rhythmic life increases the natural grace- - Your poem draws us to the beauty and serenity of nature.
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5/4/2024 2:25:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful chain poetry. Well composed with beautiful essence as coming back from the day long work. Beautiful.