It sounded like
You said “I Love You”
It sounded like
A waterfall.
It sounded like
You were so truthful,
It sounded like,
You heard my call.
It sounded like
A warming sunshine,
The completing circle
Circling me.
It sounded like
Paradise was mine,
It sounded like
You set me free.
the simplicity and the easy way it flowed is what caught my attention and yet it conveyed a powerful thought...i really liked it.
I like it. Sounds true and honest. Simple yet emphatetic. I think almost everyone has ever been in that kind of experience.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful lilting rhythm. This is lovely, Sandra. Chrissie