I.V 94s

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Join The Circus - Poem by I.V 94s

Confusion like the clown climbing
to reach the fun
Children laughing
because of pity

Come and join the circus
Travel around
Not thinking
about the consequences
that follows

Live in the bubble
that will eventually
it will not
be pretty

Comments about Join The Circus by I.V 94s

  • Rookie Kamil Michnicki (5/4/2009 4:50:00 PM)

    It's a good concept for a poem. I didn't like the last few lines. Actually I think I really like the first two lines of the first two stanzas and the first 3 lines of the last stanza. It would actually be a good poem with just those lines. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 4, 2009

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