Jonas Brothers - I Poem by Samantha Bailey

Jonas Brothers - I

Rating: 5.0


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(Nick's verse) Nick was the first one to be discovered, singing in some barber's shop
He was gettin' his hair done, just singin' and havin' some fun or He was dancin' an' singin' around while just havin' some fun
When he got a card from some lady, he said that he'd have to check, SO maybe
Next thing ya know he's playin' on Broadway and all over the radio

Now the Jonas Brothers have it all, through the eyes of boys and girls across the world
They're on the cover of every teen magazine, sayin' that thay might be dating the next Disney queen
But the Jonas Brothers is still a family affair and that's why they're still aware
That they're 'Livin' The Dream' and that without the fans they'd be nowhere

(Joe's verse) Joe ended up on Broadway too
'Cause to them music was nothing new
Now he's the band's frontman
And has been ever since they started the band

Now the Jonas Brothers have it all, through the eyes of boys and girls across the world
They're on the cover of every teen magazine, sayin' that they might be dating the next Disney Queen
But the Jonas Brothers is still a family affair and that's why they're still aware
That they're 'Livin' The Dream' and that without the fans they'd be nowhere


(Kevin's verse) It doesn't matter how Kevin does his hair
Curly, straight, sideburns, I just won't care
'Cause God gave him that one sick day
So he picked up a guitar and taught himself how to play

Now the Jonas Brothers have it all, through the eyes of boys and girls across the world
They're on the cover of every teen magazine, sayin' that they might be dating the next Disney Queen
But the Jonas Brothers is still a family affair and that's why they're still aware
That they're 'Livin' The Dream' and that without the fans they'd be nowhere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 21 August 2014

This is not written very well at all. Placement of lines and structure is completely off. I can see potential in the writer, but life is to short to write about stupid things. If your want to write, no matter what reason you have, then write about something worthwhile that is relevant in our society. If you write about rape and suicide and anorexia, and homosexuals, then you will be a writer. Open up to what is actually happening if you truly want to write; nobody cares about the Jonas brothers.

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So I can't forgive you for your crime The punishment won't end this time 'Cause now we're done, it's finally over And this hurt will fade in time itis all the way jonathan brotehres play.. good write with oen central views...

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