Joy Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Joy

Rating: 5.0


When you gave me the whole world in a lollipop,
I licked it with glee!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Wow, you know the technique how to write short and cute pieces with deep sense! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

wow, good lollipop poem bit...

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 29 May 2009

If you do any kind of work with glee the truth will set u free................lol.........: -)

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

wow these lines are soo very tasty..nice...i Liked it..how much for the lolli pop?

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A delicious poem which describes a child's joy and your own as well. It paints a picture in my mind of a big lollipop and a little girl licking for all her worth.....10 love Karin

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Seema Aarella 11 June 2009

What a different take on the theme.......a vivid perspective....absolutely charming, from the child point of view! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2009

Angelic(Annie) Female (6/4/2009 1: 39: 00 PM) Lollipop........... What do these lines refer to specifically? touch, is a whop! get is a crop. after! a flop! to name, is shop! splendid line an ahalf RR......master of 'briefs' cheers

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I would say that you responded to your 'lollipop' as a child who is in awe of what this sweet, (very large to a child as it includes the world as well) delicious naughty, yet wonderful lollipop can do for the child. I caught your glee in every lick Reshma! 10 Karin Anderson

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Angelic(Annie) Female 04 June 2009

Lollipop........... What do these lines refer to specifically?

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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