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You cant resist my golden curves,
my haughty angelic reserve,
I am the colors in a painter's palette,
the irresistible Charlotte.
My eyes look like the sun in twilight,
fields of carnations smothered in sunlight.
I am as warm as sand, cool as dewdrops,
skin like the desert sand, making your breath stop.
I am sorry, you cant take your eyes off me,
Lilly of the valley, coral drops, potpourri
I am as true as a prayer, beautiful as a painting,
pure as mother's milk, ethereal beckoning.
It ain't my fault you fell in love,
my voice rings like bells, treasure trove,
as hot as a kiln, wet as a paint brush
lustrous hair, satin sheen, poetic hush.
l am as refreshing as water, I bring out the best in you
blazing star, trust me, you have the best view.
l am as plain as vanilla ice cream, crafty labyrinth
as dreamy as bed time stories, merely Jacinth
Don't blame me if you cant stop the feeling,
you were warned of the bolt of lightning
as bubbly as champagne, truthful as a mirror
I can read your thoughts, sexy conjuror
I am as kind as music, as witty as a child,
I cant help it if that drives you wild
tough as armour, brittle as toffee,
I am one of a kind, only as beautiful as me.
Reshma Ramesh
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Thursday, September 11, 2008 |
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Thursday, August 27, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (*As beautiful as me''
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Reshma Ramesh
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/25/2010 10:14:00 PM)
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My god, u r so bold in your poetry? Thats the spirit of a great poet... bold and the beautiful. Ur thoughts and well-coined images moved me so much dear. keep this bold spirit in expression....
Your readers will fall in love
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C. P. Sharma (10/26/2009 2:22:00 AM)
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'I am one of a kind, only as beautiful as me.', the long and short of all this.
CP
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Ying Escalona (9/17/2009 8:13:00 PM)
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of course, i cannot disagree with you...
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Anand Madhukar (9/11/2009 1:59:00 PM)
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I will only say that it was a very honest and true write! ! !
Seriously, a beautiful poem, rich in imagery, self assured and wonderfully worded, with a flow like a cascading waterfall....
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Jude Pereira (9/3/2009 4:59:00 PM)
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As beautiful as you... is your masterpiece... Like The Mona Lisa for Leonardo Da Vinci... Like McBeth For Shakespeare... Like The Moon Walk for Michael Jackson... Like Fear of the dark for Iron Maiden...
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Indira Renganathan (8/21/2009 10:51:00 AM)
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As beautiful as you your poem...no doubt that you are a great poet....congrats
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dr veenaa rai (8/15/2009 8:07:00 AM)
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alluring, enticing, rings on your senses like a song...
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Dr Hitesh Sheth (8/7/2009 12:24:00 PM)
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no wonder it is in top 500.....................
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