Just 15th Street Poem by Glen Kappy

Just 15th Street

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from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

It was just 15th Street
till liquid copper

spilled
from roofs

ran
down scroll and scallop

blessed
the window glass and sills

and flooded
blacktop, tires, feet.

Then darkness came as usual
to 15th Street.

Saturday, January 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: transformation,city,light,summer,summer time ,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 July 2017

The comparison of twilight to liquid copper slowly flooding the surroundings and then dying out, paving way to darkness is so beautiful here!

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Glen Kappy 25 July 2017

thank you, valsa. i thought you'd like it as i did your haiku about sunset. sunrise and sunset, with their long shadows, are my favorite times of day. -glen

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Laurie Van Der Hart 12 January 2017

Stunning image, Glen. Such a clever way to put across the transformation, the momentary beauty. Great poem.

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Glen Kappy 12 January 2017

wow! thank you, laurie. this is a poem i first drafted when i was nineteen or twenty but didn't finish until maybe five years ago. sometimes they take a while; i'm guessing you have this experience as well. -glen

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New York, NY USA
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