Just A Little Space Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

Just A Little Space



I'm in need of a place to think
But you don't want it to be my way
Can't you see the missing link
I don't need myself here to stay

If you're on your way back
Don't drag me there with you
I still have time said the clock
Just free me and let me face what's true

I've been loyal to you and to him
Every word my heart hears honestly
I sacrificed the thing that I dream
Though it tears me apart harshly

So why am I still here
What is my reason
You taght me how to properly hear
and make my own decision

So you have to let me make them
It's how it is supposed to be
That's the way of growth of every stem
Please open your eyes to see

This rocks are part of my planned path
It's mine to remove, It's mine to face
This will never put me in wrath
So please give me just a little space

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

I like the flow and the message of the poem.. I hope you succeed in what you want my friend.. Keep it up.. c:

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Julia Pascual 30 June 2009

I like this poem... on how you fight for your rights... just believe in yourself... and don't mind what others may say... stay safe... =)

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