She is beautiful
For the man who is grateful
He is smart
For the girl who is so cute
They are getting married
At the very special period
With the blessing of their parents
They are having a new life parts
So
He is your heaven sent
Direct, not vent
So be his super human
And be her good man
Blessed marriage
Let it stay for too long ages
Dedicated to GG and FT
simon and lula
Marriage is a great union of man and woman, this poem says the feelings expressed by both
very good. sometimes though i believe marraige has a lot of different aspects to it. i wouldnt know but living in a devorced family and marrying again.... it changes you.: (
I think my favorite line is 'He is your heaven sent, Direct not vent' 10/10
amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing
amazing write by the two souls yet bound by earthly knot, let there be love blooming at the alter of unison, passionate write as their lives flow across the journey onward being guided by His kindly light, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing
beautiful work...like the way it reflects how just a mere custom binds two beings, the expectations rising on both the sides from each other, the way how the two become special for one another.. and all this just because of one custom- marriage... amazingly well written! !
I just read your Just Married; and found it to be very inspiring. Marriage is sacred and you made it so in your poem. A very good write. Lynn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
‘…He is your heaven sent/Direct, not vent…’ Fabulous lines … enjoyed.... ‘sent’ and ‘vent’ are well chosen… Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK