Just One Blow Poem by Juliana Ahongon

Just One Blow



Just one blow,
You will lift me in the sky,
That I will glow,
Like you've never seen before,

Just one blow,
You pushed me into the ground
That I can't stand up
Like you never care before

Just one blow
I can feel you in my arms
That I can hold you one last time
Like I will never let you go

Just one blow
I can feel the cold around my body
That I shiver so much
Like I will turn into freezing ice

Just one blow
I can be strong like the wind
That I can throw anything in the sky
Like you will never touch the ground anymore

Just one blow
I can do anything I want
That can be unstoppable
that no one that push me down

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the start they were lovers, they one love another in the deepest of their hearts but one day the lovers were arguing and the man said 'it's over'. So the woman cried and cant move on and didn't accept what happened between the two of them. So the woman have revenge on the man she love so much that cant move on even it is pains her heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Pradhan 01 October 2014

This poem is emotional.Great.

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