Just The Other Day.... Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Just The Other Day....

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Just the other day
looking out of my window

I saw
a baby bird learning to fly
queen bee trying to reach the sky..

I found
a pregnant cloud, hovering over
waiting to bring in a shower..

I cherished
the moments to see the bud
blooming in the beauty..

I longed
to satiate my thirst with
the dew drops on leaves..

I cried
wanting to belong
just the other day at my window......!

~23/12/09~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 06 January 2010

A beautiful poem using the nature to highlight the feeling. Lovely.

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Ranjit Ravindran 23 December 2009

Enjoyed every word of it. Simply outstanding.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 December 2009

lovely finishing lines...i cried..wanting to belong'...how lovely...10..into my favs

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