Lora Colon

Silver Star - 3,397 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Just You And Me - Poem by Lora Colon

It's two in the morning, everyone's gone,
Usually they all stay until dawn;
The smoke has cleared - I can finally see,
This is how I like it, just you and me

I prefer we chat when no one's around,
We say so much without making a sound;
I guess this is how it will always be,
Alone together - just you and me

I was thinking of you earlier tonight,
I knew I'd see you if I timed it just right;
I have to plan everything carefully,
Come sit over here - it's just you and me

Every evening I wait for the sun to go down,
Ah, the midnight chime - what a welcome sound;
Then I'm overtaken by a blessed fatigue,
I close my eyes, and it's just you and me

Let's do something crazy tomorrow - by the shore,
Maybe a picnic - we've never done that before;
I'll lay a blanket on the starlit sea,
And we'll drift away - just you and me

Tomorrow, the next day, it's always the same,
Counting the hours, I prepare for the game;
I've gotten pretty good at this fantasy -
There never was you - it's always been just me


Comments about Just You And Me by Lora Colon

  • Gold Star - 8,278 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/12/2013 1:22:00 AM)

    I've gotten pretty good at this fantasy -
    There never was you - it's always been just me
    A beautiful romance ends up in a great tragedy. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 94 Points Aman Arora (6/29/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    beautiful once again
    the last 2 lines are a little heartbreak not just for you but for the readers who are enkoying the romance. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 651 Points Serban Raducu Bogdan (5/8/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem this is. I gave you a ten. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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