meri safar
tum tak jake rook jaati.
Me jo rasta chun liya
wo tumhre taraf ghum jataa....
Kaas,
me apne apko
tumhra charno me sop paati..
Kavita,
meri har lafz,
tumhre har baatko
shoon paati.
Kaas.....
Yes, I'm from Bengal.Ye meri kosis he.Pyar iss Bhashase, par janti nhi.Thanks, Tribhawan Kaul Sir and Aftab Alam Khursheed Sir.
Bahut khub Lafz kavita ki jaan hai kaas main ise samajh pataa nice lovely thank
Nice wish...it seems you hail either from Bhihaar or Bengal. The way you have written hindi make me think so.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
agaryeh koshish he to jaari rehni chahye, kyun k yeh boht achhi koshish he...Tribhawan Kaul ji is wise enough to identify the location by the dialect used here...very good neela! ! !