Keep On Trying Poem by Nathan Branson

Keep On Trying

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When in a problem so rough
That it can only be described as tough
And you've just had enough
Keep on trying

When you're asking so desperately for love
And all you can get is a shove
Don't say your undeserving of
Keep on trying

If u just want to die
And don't want to give life a try
Don't say goodbye
Keep on trying

If u just listen to me
And aim for victory
So happy you will be
Keep on trying

Saturday, October 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: determination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 October 2016

Beautiful motivational piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Aptly, you have captured the essence of Determination in the poem. An insightful piece elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Nathan. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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