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(10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

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I went to a restaurent
with my some friends
to have a formal level brakefast
we were aware of the expenditure
thus, i ordered some petties and a coke,
and, we started our handsome meal,
unaware of what is going to be happened
an old man in his seventies
came and begged for a coin
as soon as I came outside
I thought, is he not eligible of
eating in KFC
i took him inside, though he insisted,
and have him served a good meal,
and thought in myself,
the real India lies in him,
not in those who are there in KFC.

Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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  • Anamika Jalan (7/7/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    great message behind the poem
    a clever write to show the evils out

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  • Is It Poetry (7/6/2013 6:40:00 PM)

    Yes, the real India resides
    within him......iip
    In America,
    we call it barn yard buzzard.

  • Tripsha Ghosh (7/3/2013 9:58:00 AM)

    This poem shows ur pure heart keep it up

  • Jenie Franksay (7/2/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    good..... but it could have been better.

  • Unwritten Soul (7/2/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    You so lovely and wise person...good pen and good heart make all good_Soul

  • Farah Ilyas (7/2/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    Here usage of KFC by yours is a sign of ur skillful mind, how boldly u exposed the societal economical issue...kudos

  • Yash Pradhan (6/30/2013 9:32:00 PM)

    Nice creativity.It's great.

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