' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Kid About It(Tankas) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Kid About It(Tankas)

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WITH CHILD

She was still just a
kid...having a kid. A child
carrying a child.
And next year...pregnant again
breeding her own misery.

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BEARING IT

Baby held over
her left shoulder...asleep now.
Trail of puke down back
belly full-blown with next one
bruise badly hidden with make up.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janice Windle 23 September 2009

Sad stories made more poignant by the terse tanka form you use to tell them. Very good indeed! Love, Jan xxxx

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James Mclain 20 September 2009

it is no longer.. a question of why.. do you.. some wheels have need.. of best..when they.. are seen too be broken...iip

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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