Labels (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Labels (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


'Where are you from? ' made
to divide The Sacred Whole—
we're not a label!

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: bigotry,racism,prejudice,society
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Do Cosmic Labels Define A Sacred Whole? intriguing the question the contrast with cosmic division with The Sacred Whole where none are labels but essence quantified rendered into meaning weighed balanced on a divine scale Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Labels' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2015

intriguing, the question, the contrast with division with The Sacred Whole, where none are labels, but essence quantified, rendered into meaning weighed balanced on a divine scale

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C. P. Sharma 14 November 2015

All said in a senryu. Profound and thought provoking.

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M Asim Nehal 08 November 2015

Outstanding Senryu.......Philosophical undertone in it.10+++

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