Land Of Bitterness Poem by Jacob Courtney

Land Of Bitterness



The land around me grows cold and
frigid. All who try and approach
are pushed away by the winds and
sharp edges of the land around me.
Anyone manage to make past the
bitter winds and jagged shores make
their way toward where I stand.
Along their path they are met with
nothing but harsh snow and dropping
tempetures. No matter how bad I
would like her to come closer I
can't stop the harsh weather. I
can't control it no matter what
I do. Please bring me the warming
feel of the sun. Help me escape from
this bitter land. Stay strong a
little longer and it shall surrender
to you. Don't turn back now your
so close. Just stand the bitterness
for a few more feet and you make it
to me. Save me from my bitterness
save me from this cold refuge deep
within my heart. Without you
I shall remain here for eternity.
I shall remain....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cory Jensen 11 January 2009

O.M.Gosh...this....is.......amazing........its......wow...... ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ + 10....amazing...I think I need another word... :)

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