Languidness Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Languidness

Rating: 5.0


A shrinking sentiment prompts lament.
Conversations drift,
To lift even listless leaves...
From these hot air breezes.
And witnessed by ignored life giving trees!

Many are joining in...
To add worthless comments.
Attracted by an abundant vacancy,
Of opinions lost...
Or foolishly tossed to cross,
With a few not meant to be given.
Perhaps a better use,
For them would be as moss!

And a substance shared,
Between those thick with thought...
Sit too high and declared,
They are too aloof!
Too prudesh and lofty.
Too self contained on an ego boost! !

Rare these days and scattered about,
Are minds fresh and ready to ignite...
And down to Earth with spark!
But a languidness speeds,
The impeding of a mental drought!
Viewed by drooping heads...
Parched lips and shut mouths!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you bare the angst of modernity sans emotions languageless aimless paper talk..

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Cyrina Moon 29 July 2007

Excellent poem. Sadly, true. Profound thoughts constructed and shared by you. There is a canyon of desolation that I feel, at times. I use a rusty trowel to excavate ash and bone after falling trying to climb out. I reach a little higher each time, yet looking up, the canyon wall seems to rise barely perceptively, but I know it is. I hope this comment is not unwelcome or growing green and fuzzy. Cyrina

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