Laughing Fit Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Laughing Fit

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I tip-toed into a lovers blizzard,
camouflaged myself into a rose,
danced with a white candle, then
fell to the ground into a laughing
fit,
I flaped my arms as wings, used
my feet as ores, pointed to the
heavens, and the lord said, sorry
david, but this is the real deal,
not your home,

then i fell to the ground into a
laughing fit, and thought, hes right,
this isnt my home....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2006

WELL CONSIDER THIS, dAVID....AT LEAST YOU WENT TO THE RIGHT HYJINX Nice one, as per usual...Taking the surrealties of our dreamworld & coining phrasage on paper''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Allan James Saywell 30 September 2006

you must have touched your funny bone david AJS

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